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Writing task 1 - homework for ielts students
The table illustrates the television viewing figures for sports in four countries.
Overall, television viewing's total number f or sports (1)
in the USA was the highest and the figure for
tennis was higher than any other sports.
It is clear that tennis was the most popular sport (3) , at 25.9 (2)
, in which the USA accounted for 7 (2) while Australia an d Canada (4)
were the lowest and were slightly the same, at 6.2 and 6.1
(2)respectively. Golf was less popular than tennis with 21.9 (2)(5), in which the USA had a noticeable number (6)(5) , at 11.2 (2)
but the viewing figure of it in the UK (7) was the lowest, and (8) 2.8 (2). By
contrast, the UK had the highest number for motor racing (9) with 6.2 (2)
. It can be seen that the USA
and Canada had the lowest figures for this sport, at 1.1 and 1.5 (2)
respectively. Besides, the amount of
television viewing figures for athletics made up 16.9 (2)
, in which the USA was the highest, at 5.5 (2)
whereas it was just only 3 million in Australia.
(1) Lỗỗi diễỗn đ t => the total n ạ
umber of sports views on television. You can also say “of the four
nations, the USA had the largest number of people who watched sports on television” (2) Thiễếu đ n v ơ : 25.9 million views ị
(3) Mỗn ph biễến nhấết ổ đấu? T ở
rong 4 quỗếc gia => in the four countries
(4) Lỗỗi diễỗn đ t,
ạ cái gì c a Aus và C ủ
an thấếp nhấết? => the figures for Australia and Canada
(5) Thỗng tin ch a rõ => 21.9 million views in total ư (6) Myỗ có sỗế l t xem c ượ
ao nhấết thì ph i nói rõ r ả
a là đ ng nhấết, dùng noticeable khỗng đ ứ . ủ
(7) The figure for the UK
(8) Spelling mistake => at
(9) Number of motor racing views
(10) Cách phấn tích và trình bày thỗng tin còn cấần luy n t ệ
p. Nễn phấn chia đo ậ n bằầng các ạ h nhóm nh ng
ữ data cùng lo i vào c ạ hung nhóm.
(11) Cấu introduction là 1 phấần c a
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