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BÀI TẬP IELTS WRITING: Phân Tích Công Nghệ Hiện Đại và Tác Động Xã Hội - Studocu BÀI TẬP IELTS WRITING DAY2:
BÀI 1 : Some people believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behaviour, but
others think it has reduced social interactions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
BÀI 2. Some say that university students should be free to choose their subjects. Others believe
that they should only be allowed to study courses of future benefits like science and technology.
Discuss both views and give your opinion. BÀI LÀM BÀI 1
The appearance of modern technology has caused controversy to explode in today’s society . Some
people are of the opinion that modern technology has enhanced sociable conduct while others think it
has reduced social interaction. From a general perspective, this essay argues that the benefits of modern
society outweight the potential risks. Although modern technology is blamed for reducing social engagements .
First and foremost , some individuals view modern technology as a hazardous innovation issue and are
worried about their effect on society , particularly their distance-creating between relationships in
community. Technology equipments are invented as tools to support people from many aspects in life
like working , education, gathering information,save data …..But people spend too much time on them,
become more isolated and forget others relationships . Even worse, this is being rejuvenated as young
people are increasingly exposed to these device and lack of communication skill.
On the other hand, those who believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior argue
that they play an important role in every daily activities . Working , education, cooking , communication
….all have the presence of advanced equipment . Especially the improvements in contacting and online
meeting when just one click then you can connect with new friends from all over the world or a distance
call with family and friends . For instance, comparing to the past when people had to wait a month for a
reply, this development is an overwhelming step.
In my opinion, while the modern technology have the potential to be incredibly useful , they are not
without risks. However, the benenfits of modern technology outweight the risks if they are used in the
right way. For example, in this busy era ,using modern tools like automatic device can help people saving a lot of time and effort.
In conclusion, the development of modern technology is a complex and multifaceted issue. While some
people view them as essential for human development, others are concerned about their potential
negative effects pn society. Ultimate , the key to using modern technology effectively is using a suitable way. Revised version
The appearance of modern technology has sparked a heated debate in today's society. Some
people believe that modern technology has enhanced social behavior, while others think it has 15:43, 09/01/2026
BÀI TẬP IELTS WRITING: Phân Tích Công Nghệ Hiện Đại và Tác Động Xã Hội - Studocu
reduced social interactions. From a general perspective, this essay argues that the benefits of
modern society outweigh the potential risks, although modern technology is blamed for reducing social engagements.
First and foremost, some individuals view modern technology as a hazardous issue and are
worried about its effect on society, particularly its ability to create distance between relationships
in the community. While technology was invented as a tool to support people in many aspects of
life, such as working, education, gathering information, and saving data, people tend to spend
too much time on them, becoming more isolated and forgetting about relationships. Even worse,
this trend is being rejuvenated as young people are increasingly exposed to these devices and lack communication skills.
On the other hand, those who believe that modern technology has enhanced sociable behavior
argue that it plays an important role in daily activities. Working, education, cooking, and
communication all benefit from advanced equipment. In particular, the improvements in
contacting and online meetings enable people to connect with new friends from all over the
world or to have distance calls with family and friends. For instance, compared to the past when
people had to wait for a month for a reply, this development is an overwhelming step.
In my opinion, while modern technology has the potential to be incredibly useful, it is not without
risks. However, the benefits of modern technology outweigh the risks if they are used in the right
way. For example, in this busy era, using modern tools like automatic devices can help people save a lot of time and effort.
In conclusion, the development of modern technology is a complex and multifaceted issue.
While some people view it as essential for human development, others are concerned about its
potential negative effects on society. Ultimately, the key to using modern technology effectively is using it in a suitable way. DAY ?
Question 1 : Today, many people use the internet and smartphone to transfer money to friends, family,
and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?
In today’s modern society, the use of the internet and smartphones to conduct transaction have
become ubiquitous in many countries . While some argue that this increased prevalence is positive due
to the convenience, others express concern that the over reliance on devices and the posibible frauds .
However, this essay will argue that the benefits of online transaction outweight any potential negative impact.
First and foremost, online transfer offers numberous of benefits to their owners. Transfer money
through the internet and smartphones has made financial transactions more accessible, convenient, and
cost-effective. For instance, individuals can now avoid the hassle of carrying cash or checks and standing
in long queues at banks or ATMs.
Moreover, this technology has made it possible to transfer money across borders without the need for
implicated and expensive procedures. Addictionally, online money transfer services often offer lower
fees and exchange rates compared to traditional banks, making it easier for people to send money to
their loved ones or make payments to businesss. 15:43, 09/01/2026
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While it is true that the increased reliance on digital platforms for financial transactions has made
people more vulnerable to cyberattacks, fraud and indentity theft, these issues can be addressed
through enhanced informations protection. Governments can also play a role in making laws to protect internet users.
In conclusion, the increasing prevalance of online transfer provides numerous benefits to individuals and
society as a whole. While there are appehensions regarding identity theft, these issues can be addressed
through enhanced information protection. Therefore, it is important to recognize the positive impact
that online transfer have on our daily lives while also working towards a more sustainable and responsible future. 15:43, 09/01/2026
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