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PROCESS
man-made natural
Structure:
Introduction - overview - body 1 - body 2
1. How to write an introduction
The diagram illustrates how S + V / the process of ____.
Task: the diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
Paraphrase:
The diagram illustrates the process of a salmon life, from egg to adult fish.
The diagram depicts the life stages / the stages in the life of a salmon, starting from egg and ending as an adult fish.
The diagram illustrates how a salmon grows and develops, starting from the egg stage and progressing to an adult fish., from birth to maturity.
mature
maturity



Task: The diagram illustrates the process of producing olive oil.
The diagram shows how olive oil is produced.
The diagram describes how olive oil were created
The diagram depicts how olive oil produced.
Task: The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing electricity in a hydroelectric power station.
The diagram describes the process of electricity the process of generating electricity in a hydroelectric power factory. power station/plant
The diagram illustrates the process of generating electricity in a hydroelectric power plant.
2. How to write an overview
- total number of stages/steps
- starting and ending points
- general statement about the nature of the process
+ man-made / natural
+ cyclical / linear
Overall, the process involves/consists of/ includes/comprises + số steps/stages, commencing with + V_ing and finishing with V_ing. It is a linear/cyclical + man-made/natural process involving manual and mechanical steps.
The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram describes the production process of sugar from sugarcane.
The diagram describes the process of producing sugar from sugar cane.
The diagram depicts how sugar is made from sugar cane.
Overall, the process consists of seven (distinct) stages, commencing with planting the growth of sugar canes and finishing with dried and cooled sugar drying and cooling. It is a cyclical linear, man-made process involving manual and mechanical steps.
It is a dark red room.
It is a dark, red room.
Overall, the process includes seven steps, commencing with a growing stage the growth of sugarcane and finishing with dried and cooled sugar. It is a linear, man-made process involving both manual and mechanical steps.
Overall, the process consists of seven stages, commencing with growing sugarcane and finishing with drying and cooling sugar. It is a linear, man-made process involving manual and mechanical steps.
Order
- At the beginning.../ At the start... Firstly/first > secondly/second > thirdly/third > Then, > After + V_ing/NP/ clause/ that > Next > Following + V_ing/NP/Clause/that > Subsequently >Finally/Lastly/ In the final step/ In the end
Details
- In addition/ Moreover / Additionally / At the same time
Cause and effect
- Consequently / As a result / Therefore / Thus ...
Simultaneous actions
- Meanwhile/During this stage/While this is happening/At the same time
At the beginning, the sugar cane must be taken a good care in 12 to 18 months. Then, it is harvested???. After harvesting, it is crushed by the sugarcane mill to provide juice. Subsequently, the juice is heated and become mixed sugar.
At the starts, the sugar canes being/ are grown for around 12 to 18 months until they reach maturity. Once fully grown, they are harvested either manually with a machete, or mechanically with the help of specialized machinery. Then the harvested sugar canes are crushed by an industrial roller to extract the juice.
After 12 to 18 months of growing, planted sugar canes are fully matured and ready to be harvested by either machine or human harvesters. Next, the canes are crushed to seperate the juice from the pulb.