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1. Should homework occupy all the free time of college students?
While classroom time is important, playground time is just as important. So
homework shouldn’t occupy all the free time of college students as sedentary
lifestyle (1)can be dangerous and can cause health problem for we (2). College
students are always on work with our projects and deadline, so we don’t have much
time to enjoy our lifestyle, less time to do extracurricular activities such as sport,
music or art, and our mind can’t relax which can lead to some health issues.
Moreover, it can make student become passive and limited (3)the communication
among human. Especially about (4) students who have to work pass-time (5) job, the
amount of homework and the press of job can make those students stress and tired
that lead to ineffective learning. Therefore, I think hw should be just enough so that
students can easily arrange their time between studying and relaxing, bringing effective quality learning. (1): a sedentary lifestyle (2): for us (3): limit (4): amongst (5) part-time
Phần đỏ: paraphase là tốt nhưng mà ở đây thì sai -> are always working Sửa
While classroom time is important, playground time is just as important. So
homework shouldn’t occupy all the free time of college students as having too much
hw can result in a sedentary lifestyle and can cause health problem for us. College
students are always working with our projects and deadline, so we don’t have much
time to enjoy our lifestyle, less time to do extracurricular activities such as sport,
music or art, and our mind can’t relax which can lead to some health issues.
Moreover, it can make student become passive and limit the communication among
human. Especially about students who have to work part-time jobs, the amount of
homework and the press of job can make those students stress and tired that lead
to ineffective learning. Therefore, I think hw should be just enough so that students
can strike a healthy balance between learning and leisure, improving the quality of their educational experience. Viết lại
College students must learn to balance their extracurricular and academic pursuits.
While learning in the classroom is important, having too much homework can result
in a sedentary lifestyle and health hazards. Because they frequently have a lot on
their plate, college students need to make time for extracurricular activities and
leisure, such as sports, music, or the arts, which are important for their general
wellbeing and mental health. Overloading oneself with homework can also result in
passivity and reduce social interaction. This problem is especially severe for people
who work part-time jobs because the strain of both work and school can lead to
burnout and decreased learning efficacy. Therefore, it is important to assign
homework sparingly so that students can strike a healthy balance between learning
and leisure, ultimately improving the quality of their educational experience.
2. Is time management suitable for everybody ?
Time management is a vital skill for human because it determines your ability to
meet deadlines and operate productively. This skill can benefit our personal and
professional life in multiple ways and will help us divide the tasks that need to be
completed without failure, increasing productivity. It allows we to complete tasks
within our deadlines and maintain a great public image, leading to people viewing
you as reliable, boosts your energy
making you more active and focused. levels,
Beside that it also helps us have enough time for ourselves to relax, arranging
reasonable living hours to maintain good health and spirit, bring more opportunity
for us such as we can have time to experience many other tasks. Therefore, we
need to create a proper schedule, be realistic about the time we need for each task
by dividing our tasks into smaller ones and have a short time in between to relax,
using free time productively is a great strategy for time management.
Bài này viết đc, có vài lỗi nhỏ nên t sửa thẳng vào bài
3.Should a person control their screen time ?
Recently, technology become more and more developing (1). The excessive and
obsessive use of digital devices such as smartphones , tablets and more that
interferes with our daily life. So (2) people should know how to control our screen
time can (3) help to lower the risks associated with technology addiction and can
help we reap many benefits in return. We should reduce our screen time because
the blue light emitted from our screens can affected (4) to our contact eyes, regulate
sleep and our brain function will be decreased in overall productivity. Technology is a
tool and can be a great asset in helping we (5) achieve our goals but we should
control it to maintain our communication, protect our health, improve more
productivity at work by make a properly (6) schedule, tracking our device usage to
become mindful of our tech habits.
(1): sai ngữ pháp -> technology have become more and more advanced/developed.
(2): So ko nên đứng đầu câu -> Therefore, (3): helps bỏ can (4): can affect và bỏ can (5): us (6): proper Sửa
With the speed at which technology is developing, screen time management is becoming more and
more crucial.. The excessive and obsessive use of digital devices such as smartphones
, tablets and more that interferes with our daily life. Therefore, people should know
how to control our screen time helps to lower the risks associated with technology
addiction and can help we reap many benefits in return. We should reduce our
screen time because the blue light emitted from our screens can affect our contact
eyes, regulate sleep and our brain function will be decreased in overall productivity.
Technology is a tool and can be a great asset in helping us achieve our goals but we
should control it to maintain our communication, protect our health, improve more
productivity at work by make a proper schedule, tracking our device usage to
become mindful of our tech habits. Bài khác
With the speed at which technology is developing, screen time management is becoming more and
more crucial. The widespread use of digital gadgets like tablets and smartphones can cause disruptions
in daily life and even lead to a potential addiction to technology. Limiting screen time is essential to
reducing the risks that come with using devices excessively. Extended exposure to blue light from
screens can have a negative impact on sleep patterns, impair brain function, and harm eyes, all of which
can lower productivity. Technology can be a useful tool for accomplishing objectives, but it must be used
carefully. Developing a balanced schedule, monitoring device usage, and being aware of our digital
habits are all necessary for effective management. This strategy not only maintains the quality of our
interpersonal communications while safeguarding our health, but it also increases productivity.