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TASK 1: What are the effects effect of deforestation?
⇨ Deforestation has become one of the most important issues in many
countries across the world nowadays, causes many negative effects. Forests
are home to many species, and deforestation brings many disadvantages to
their habitat due to the loss or degradation of habitat, which contributes to
the extinction of many animals and plants. Particularly, the removal of trees
reduces an amount ( the amount of ) of food, water, and even shelter, in the
long run, that can have an a detrimental detrimental effect on the earth’
biodiversity. Deforestation also put pressure on the environment. By cutting
down trees, more greenhouse gases are released into atmosphere ( cắt cây thì
k có cái gì để hấp thụ greenhouse gases chứ s lại release more, nhà máy xe
cộ mới release chứ nhì, nếu muốn nói thế này thì phải giải thích thêm là cây
hấp thụ bớt nên nếu chặt cây quá nhiều thì lượng greenhouse gases trong
không khí nhiều hơn chứ k phải bị released nhiều hơn) . This not only
increases the earth’s average temperature, but also brings to ozone layer
depletion. In conclusion, deforestation is an critical problem that needs to be
dealt with immediately.(+ By gorvernments and individuals) ⇨
C1: t nghĩ vế sau nên dùng mệnh đề quan hệ để làm rõ vấn đề hơn, nêu rõ
negative effects on cái gì nhé ( on both human life and wildlife) ⇨
2 động từ ở trong câu chưa cùng 1 thì ( has become…, which causes… hoặc
has become ….and has caused sẽ đúng hơn), ⇨
nowadays t thấy thường đứng ở đầu câu hơn là cuối câu ⇨
Nowadays, deforestation has become one of the most important in many
countries that causes many negative effects on both wildlife and human life. ⇨
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recommend dùng threats to their life( sự đe doạ đến sự sống của chúng)- about:blank 1/2 00:08 29/7/24 Environment
( could bring a variety of threats to their life due to the loss or the degration of their habitat.) ⇨
Many có thể thay bằng a variety of, a myriad of, a numerous of thì nghe fancy hơn ấ ⇨
Thường viết mấy bài này á, nta bảo nên đưa ra các cụm từ mang tính khách
quan kiểu như it is undeniable that, it is considered that, it is said that hoặc
dùng may might, can coud will chứ đừng đưa ra ý kiến 1 cách chắc chắn
quá. Vd it is undeniable that forests are home to many species.. ⇨
M thử kết hợp cách dùng các từ nối như besides, moreover, furthermore các
thứ để bài có sự liên kết chặt chẽ với nghe tưh nhiên hơn nhe
TASK 2: What can be done to solve the problem of air pollution?
⇨ Air pollution is a pressing issue that grabs the whole world’s attention
nowadays. However, there are several measures which, if taken wisely, can
help to improve the situation. Firstly, organisations should launch campaigns
to raise people’s awareness and introduce laws to limit emissions from
factories. By being taught about effects of air pollution, more people will go
green, which is considered highly beneficial to their health, especially
respiratory system. Secondly, people should take responsibility for the
impact they have on the environment. They can use public transport or
recycle rather than driving. This not only is cost-effective but also releases
fewer quantities of air pollutants. Finally, government could invest more in
green technology such as hybrid vehicles or renewable energy sources. This
way can reduce the consumption of fossil fuels and exhausts fewer fumes
into the environment. In conclusion, both government and individuals play
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