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Source
Mrs. Sunitha K “ Impact Of Advertisement On
Children. Accessed at:
https://www.ijsdr.org/papers/IJSDR1607047.
pdf
There is a minor error including
Mrs.
In-text
citation
Sunitha K. (2016). Impact of advertisement
on children. International Journal of
Scientific Development Research, 2(7), 5263.
Meet the requirement of APA style for
In-text citation and reference list
section
Search Terms
used
“Impact of advertisement on children”
research
Scholarly
purpose
. The paper aims to contribute to existing
knowledge and inform future research by
investigating the multifaceted impact of
advertising on children.
The given information for authors is
clear and well-developed so you get
a 2 for this section
Authority
. The author's credentials and research
focus lend credibility, but the
publication's relative newness raises
questions about broader scholarly
impact.
Audience
. Primarily academics and researchers in
child development, psychology, marketing,
and media studies.
. Educators, policymakers, and parents
may find it informative but require
additional resources for practical
application.
You list the subjects but do not
give me a specific audience for
the study
Objectivity
. Concerns remain about objectivity due
to the focus on negative consequences,
limited counterarguments, and loaded
language
The given information for the
objectivity is clear enough.
Accuracy
.The paper relies on credible sources and
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Effect of advertisement on children
Source 1:
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...consider objectivity
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Currency
The year is correct so you get 2
for this section
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Source 2:
at:
https://www.academia.edu/103587564
/Effects_of_Advertising_on_Youth_A
ge_Group_of_13_19_Years_Age_
author`s name.
In-text
citation
Martin, M. C. (1997). Children's
understanding of the intent of
advertising: A meta-analysis. Journal of
Advertising, 26(3), 13-35.
The given reference is clear and correct
Search
Terms used
Children's advertising comprehension
Scholarly
purpose
. To provide a comprehensive
overview of the existing research
on children's understanding of the
intent of advertising.
. To identify the factors that
contribute to the variability in
results across studies.
. To develop a theoretical framework
for understanding children's
understanding of advertising intent.
. To make recommendations for
future research on this topic.
Scholarly purpose is clear and logical.
Providing legible and sufficient
information so you get 2 for this
section.
Source
Effects of Advertising on Youth (Age
group of 13-19 Years Age). Accessed
A minor error is not include the
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Authority
. Mary C. Martin, Assistant
Professor of Marketing at The
University of North Carolina at
Charlotte, is the author of the paper.
She acknowledges the support and
assistance of several colleagues.
Audience
.The primary audience of the
excerpt is likely researchers and
policymakers concerned with the
effects of advertising on children.
The information is clear.
Objectivity
. Concerns remain about
Does the learner...
Doesn't do this OR
answers incorrectly (0
marks)
Does this
correctly (1
mark)
Does this
correctly AND to
a high standard
(2 marks)
objectivity due to the focus on
negative consequences, limited
counterarguments, and loaded
language
lOMoARcPSD| 58097008
Accuracy
.The paper itself does a good job
of outlining the research question
and methodology, but it's
important to consider the following
factors when evaluating its
accuracy:
Selection of studies: Did the
author use a comprehensive
and unbiased approach to
identify relevant studies?
Coding and analysis: Were
the studies coded and
analyzed in a reliable and
objective manner?
Quality of the included
studies: Were the studies that
were included of high
methodological quality?
Publication bias: Is it possible
that the author only included
studies that supported their
hypothesis?
The information in this section is
standardized, correct, and well-developed
so I give you 2 for this part
Currency
.This research is not entirely
current. While it and concepts
discussed are still relevant to the
ongoing investigation of children’s
understanding of advertising, the
data ans specific references are from
the late 1980s and early 1990s.
The year is quite old but it is correct
lOMoARcPSD| 58097008
---include an accurate
reference list citation?
X
...include an accurate
intext citation?
X
---include search terms
X
...consider scholarly
purpose
X
...consider authority
X
...consider audience
X
...consider objectivity
X
...consider accuracy
X
...consider currency
X
TOTAL
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Criteria
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Reviewer`s
feedback
Source
Impact of unhealthy food marketing on children. Accessed at:
https://www.obesityevidencehub.org.au/c ollections/prevention/the-impact-of-
foodmarketing-on-children?
fbclid=IwAR1jzETCeAsRvnYhowFZVAiB78prb9K9OjBaeTUKf4EjEgdcUL_G8iqWM
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minor error
is not
include the
author`s
name.
In-text
citation
Last updated 19-08-2022
You do not
give the
relevant
reference
Search
Terms
used
“ Kids marketing; Marketing to children”
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SOURCE 3
Scholarly
purpose
.The paper show that marketing of unhealthy foods and drink to children may
contribute to obesity by influencing their food choices, taking advantage of their
developmental vulnerabilities
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Authority
. The author's credentials and
research focus lend credibility, but
the publication's relative newness
raises questions about broader
scholarly impact.
You do not give a enough
specific information about
author
Audience
. Primarily academics and
researchers in child development,
psychology, marketing, and media
studies.
. Educators, policymakers, and
parents may find it informative but
require additional resources for
practical application.
The information is clear so
you get 2 for this part
Objectivity
. High objectivity because it is based
on many different perspectives.
. Use many reputable sources.
Provides many different opinions
and data about many marketing
discipline.
Accuracy
.High accuracy, get data and
information from many news and
research sources.
. More than 37 sources of information
have been mentioned in the
references section of the article.
Currency
. Last updated:2022
. The context of the article is set in a
recent period of time so the
applicability of the article also wrote
about today’s burning issue, so the
information it gave is still useful
today.
The year is
correct
Does the learner...
Doesn't do this
OR answers
incorrectly (0
marks)
Does this
correctly (1
mark)
Does this
correctly AND to
a high standard
(2 marks)
lOMoARcPSD| 58097008
---include an accurate
reference list citation?
X
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...include an accurate
intext citation?
X
---include search terms
X
...consider scholarly
purpose
X
...consider authority
X
...consider audience
X
...consider objectivity
X
...consider accuracy
X
...consider currency
X
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lOMoAR cPSD| 58097008 Criteria
Answers (one or more sentences) Reviewer`s feedback
Mrs. Sunitha K “ Impact Of Advertisement On There is a minor error including Children. Accessed at: Mrs. Source
https://www.ijsdr.org/papers/IJSDR1607047. pdf
Sunitha K. (2016). Impact of advertisement
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In-text citation and reference list In-text
on children. International Journal of section citation
Scientific Development Research, 2(7), 5263. Search Terms
“Impact of advertisement on children” used research .
The given information for authors is
The paper aims to contribute to existing Scholarly
clear and well-developed so you get
knowledge and inform future research by purpose a 2 for this section
investigating the multifaceted impact of advertising on children.
. The author's credentials and research
focus lend credibility, but the
publication's relative newness raises
Authority
questions about broader scholarly impact.
. Primarily academics and researchers in
You list the subjects but do not
child development, psychology, marketing, give me a specific audience for and media studies. the study Audience
. Educators, policymakers, and parents
may find it informative but require
additional resources for practical application.
. The given information for the
Concerns remain about objectivity due objectivity is clear enough. Objectivity
to the focus on negative consequences,
limited counterarguments, and loaded language Accuracy
.The paper relies on credible sources and lOMoAR cPSD| 58097008
Effect of advertisement on children Source 1: lOMoAR cPSD| 58097008
evidence, but the reliance on secondary
research raises concerns about generalizability.
.Published in 2016, the paper's specific
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context might be dated, but the core for this section Currency
themes remain relevant to the ongoing
discussion about protecting children
from advertising's potential harms.
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Answers (one or more sentences) Reviewer`s feedback lOMoAR cPSD| 58097008 Source
Effects of Advertising on Youth (Age
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group of 13-19 Years Age). Accessed Source 2: at: author`s name.
https://www.academia.edu/103587564
/Effects_of_Advertising_on_Youth_A ge_Group_of_13_19_Years_Age_
Martin, M. C. (1997). Children's
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understanding of the intent of citation
advertising: A meta-analysis. Journal of Advertising, 26(3), 13-35. Search
Children's advertising comprehension Terms used
. To provide a comprehensive
Scholarly purpose is clear and logical.
overview of the existing research
Providing legible and sufficient
on children's understanding of the
information so you get 2 for this intent of advertising. section.
. To identify the factors that
contribute to the variability in results across studies.
Scholarly purpose
. To develop a theoretical framework for understanding children's
understanding of advertising intent.

. To make recommendations for
future research on this topic.
lOMoAR cPSD| 58097008
. Mary C. Martin, Assistant
Professor of Marketing at The Authority
University of North Carolina at
Charlotte, is the author of the paper.
She acknowledges the support and
assistance of several colleagues.

.The primary audience of the The information is clear. Audience
excerpt is likely researchers and
policymakers concerned with the
effects of advertising on children.
Objectivity
. Concerns remain about
objectivity due to the focus on
negative consequences, limited
counterarguments, and loaded
language Does the learner... Doesn't do this OR Does this Does this
answers incorrectly (0 correctly (1 correctly AND to marks) mark) a high standard (2 marks) lOMoAR cPSD| 58097008
.The paper itself does a good job
The information in this section is
of outlining the research question
standardized, correct, and well-developed
and methodology, but it's so I give you 2 for this part
important to consider the following factors when evaluating its accuracy:
● Selection of studies: Did the author use a comprehensive and unbiased approach to
identify relevant studies?

● Coding and analysis: Were the studies coded and Accuracy analyzed in a reliable and objective manner?
● Quality of the included
studies: Were the studies that were included of high methodological quality?
● Publication bias: Is it possible
that the author only included studies that supported their hypothesis?
.This research is not entirely
The year is quite old but it is correct
current. While it and concepts
discussed are still relevant to the
ongoing investigation of children’s
Currency
understanding of advertising, the
data ans specific references are from
the late 1980s and early 1990s.
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Answers (one or more sentences) Reviewer`s feedback
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. The author's credentials and You do not give a enough
research focus lend credibility, but specific information about
the publication's relative newness author Authority
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. Primarily academics and The information is clear so
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psychology, marketing, and media Audience studies.
. Educators, policymakers, and
parents may find it informative but
require additional resources for practical application.

. High objectivity because it is based
on many different perspectives. Objectivity
. Use many reputable sources.
Provides many different opinions and data about many marketing discipline.
.High accuracy, get data and
information from many news and Accuracy research sources.
. More than 37 sources of information have been mentioned in the
references section of the article.
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. The context of the article is set in a
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information it gave is still useful today.
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