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📖 AVTC2_Unit 5_Descriptive paragraphs III. POST-WRITING Task 1: Checklist for self / peer assessment.
Below is a checklist for the outline of a descriptive paragraph. Use these questions to check your
own writing, or get a peer (another student) to help you. Questions Yes / No Comment I have no f urther
1. Does the outline have a topic sentence? Yes comments, sorry teacher I have no f urther
2. Does the outline have supporting sentences? Yes comments, sorry teacher I have no f urther
3. Does each supporting sentence relate to the topic? Yes comments, sorry teacher
4. Do the supporting sentences include the details relating I have no f urther
to some or al five senses (taste, touch, smel , sound, and yes comments, sorry sight)? teacher I have no f urther
5. Does the concluding sentence rephrase the topic yes comments, sorry
sentence (repeat in different words)? teacher
Task 2: Brainstorm ideas for the following topic.
Describe your pet or your favorite animal.
Here are some suggested questions: 1. What is the pet/animal? 2. What does it look like?
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📖 AVTC2_Unit 5_Descriptive paragraphs 3. What does it often do?
4. How do you feel about your pet/animal? I have a h amster at hom .
e His name is Pudding.I have been r aised him over 1 y ears. He ha s this name because he has a c hubby bod
y and look like a pudding.He ha s a white and black
fur.His eyes was black and big. He ha
s a little size so sometime I lost him. He so fast
although he has short legs. He very friendly and lovely. H e always sleep which means he
real y lazy most of hamster like this.They sleep in al day and w ake up i n the evening. They
find food in night same as wild a nimals. Sometime they do c
ute action that so funny. The y
cant live too long.The l ife of hamster is only 2-3 years .That so sad, they easy to die but they
easy to raise if they have good h
ealthy they can live longer.We need feed them once every 3
days.They can clean their body.So we neednt take care of them too much.In conclusion i
think my Pudding is the cutest animal in the world, I f eel him can listen and understand what i say.I r eal y love him i w ish he c
an stay with me longest he can.He helps me not lonely so i think I’m so lucky when I r aised him.
Task 3: Complete an outline for the topic above. Topic Sentence:__I h ave a h
amster at home. His name is Pudding.I have been r aised him over 1 years _ _ Supporting Sentence 1:_He ha s this name because he has a c hubby body and look like a pudding.He ha
s a white and black fur.His eyes was black and big. He has a little size so
sometime I lost him. He so fast although he ha
s short legs. He very friendly and lovely._
Detail 1:______What does my pet look like_ _ _ ___ Supporting Sentence 2:____H
e always sleep which means he real y lazy most of hamster like
this.They sleep in al day and w ake up i n the e
vening. They find food in night same as wild animals. Sometime they do c ute action that so funny.__ _ _ Detail 2:__A hamster days_ _
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📖 AVTC2_Unit 5_Descriptive paragraphs Supporting Sentence 3:__The
y cant live too long.The l ife of hamster is only 2-3 years.That so
sad, they easy to die but they easy to raise if they have good h
ealthy they can live longer.We
need feed them once every 3 days.They can clean their body.So we neednt take care of them too much__ _
Detail 3:_____How to raise hamster____
Concluding Sentence: __In conclusion i t hink my Pudding is the cutest animal in the world, I f eel
him can listen and understand what i s ay.I real y love him i w ish he c an stay with me longest he
can.He helps me not lonely so i t hink I’m so lucky when I r aised him.__
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