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III. POST-WRITING
Task 1 Checklist for self / peer assessment.:
Below is a checklist for the outline of a descriptive paragraph. Use these questions to check your
own writing, or get a peer (another student) to help you.
Questions
Yes / No
Comment
1. Does the outline have a topic sentence?
Yes
I have further no
comments, sorry
teacher
2. Does the outline have supporting sentences?
Yes
I have further no
comments, sorry
teacher
3. Does each supporting sentence relate to the topic?
Yes
I have further no
comments, sorry
teacher
4. Do the supporting sentences include the details relating
to some or all five senses (taste, touch, smell, sound, and
sight)?
yes
I have further no
comments, sorry
teacher
5 Does the concluding sentence rephrase the topic .
sentence (repeat in different words)?
yes
I have further no
comments, sorry
teacher
Task 2: Brainstorm ideas for the following topic.
Describe your pet or your favorite animal.
Here are some suggested questions:
1. What is the pet/animal?
2. What does it look like?
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3. What does it often do?
4. How do you feel about your pet/animal?
I have hamster at ho .His name is Pudding.I have raised him over years. He a me been 1 has
this name because he has chubby and look like a pudding.He a white and black a body has
fur.His eyes was black and big. He a little size so sometime I lost him. He so fast has
although he has short legs. He very friendly and lovely. always sleep which means He he
really lazy most of hamster like this.They sleep in all day wake in the evening. They and up
find food in night same as animals. Sometime they cute action that so funny. wild do They
cant live too long. life of hamster is only 2- years .That so sad, they easy to die but they The 3
easy to raise if they have healthy they can live longer.We need feed them once every good 3
days.They can clean their body.So we neednt take care of them too much.In conclusion i
think my Pudding is the cutest animal in the world, feel him can listen and understand what I i
say. really love him wish can stay with me longest he can.He helps me not lonely so I i he i
think I so lucky when raised him. m I
Task 3: Complete an outline for the topic above.
Topic Sentence:__ have hamster at hoI a me. His name is Pudding.I have raised him over been
1 years __
Supporting Sentence 1:_He this name because he chubby body and look like a has has a
pudding.He a white and black fur.His eyes was black and big. He has has a little size so
sometime I lost him. He so fast although he short legs. He very friendly and lovely._ has
Detail 1:______What does my pet look like ____ __
Supporting Sentence 2:____ always sleep which means he really lazy most of hamster like He
this.They sleep in all day wake in t evening. They find food in night same as and up he wild
animals. Sometime they cute action that so funny. _ do ___
Detail 2:__A hamster days __
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Supporting Sentence 3:__ cant live too long. life of hamster is only 2- years.That so They The 3
sad, they easy to die but they easy to raise if they have healthy they can live longer.We good
need feed them once every days.They can clean their body.So we neednt take care of them 3
too much ___
Detail 3:_____How to raise hamster____
Concluding Sentence: __In conclusion think my Pudding is the cutest animal in the world, feel i I
him can listen and understand what say.i I really love him wish can stay with me longest he i he
can.He helps me not lonely so think I so lucky when raised him.__ i m I
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📖 AVTC2_Unit 5_Descriptive paragraphs III. POST-WRITING Task 1: Checklist for self / peer assessment.
Below is a checklist for the outline of a descriptive paragraph. Use these questions to check your
own writing, or get a peer (another student) to help you. Questions Yes / No Comment I have no f urther
1. Does the outline have a topic sentence? Yes comments, sorry teacher I have no f urther
2. Does the outline have supporting sentences? Yes comments, sorry teacher I have no f urther
3. Does each supporting sentence relate to the topic? Yes comments, sorry teacher
4. Do the supporting sentences include the details relating I have no f urther
to some or al five senses (taste, touch, smel , sound, and yes comments, sorry sight)? teacher I have no f urther
5. Does the concluding sentence rephrase the topic yes comments, sorry
sentence (repeat in different words)? teacher
Task 2: Brainstorm ideas for the following topic.
Describe your pet or your favorite animal.
Here are some suggested questions: 1. What is the pet/animal? 2. What does it look like?
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📖 AVTC2_Unit 5_Descriptive paragraphs 3. What does it often do?
4. How do you feel about your pet/animal? I have a h amster at hom .
e His name is Pudding.I have been r aised him over 1 y ears. He ha s this name because he has a c hubby bod
y and look like a pudding.He ha s a white and black
fur.His eyes was black and big. He ha
s a little size so sometime I lost him. He so fast
although he has short legs. He very friendly and lovely. H e always sleep which means he
real y lazy most of hamster like this.They sleep in al day and w ake up i n the evening. They
find food in night same as wild a nimals. Sometime they do c
ute action that so funny. The y
cant live too long.The l ife of hamster is only 2-3 years .That so sad, they easy to die but they
easy to raise if they have good h
ealthy they can live longer.We need feed them once every 3
days.They can clean their body.So we neednt take care of them too much.In conclusion i
think my Pudding is the cutest animal in the world, I f eel him can listen and understand what i say.I r eal y love him i w ish he c
an stay with me longest he can.He helps me not lonely so i think I’m so lucky when I r aised him.
Task 3: Complete an outline for the topic above. Topic Sentence:__I h ave a h
amster at home. His name is Pudding.I have been r aised him over 1 years _ _ Supporting Sentence 1:_He ha s this name because he has a c hubby body and look like a pudding.He ha
s a white and black fur.His eyes was black and big. He has a little size so
sometime I lost him. He so fast although he ha
s short legs. He very friendly and lovely._
Detail 1:______What does my pet look like_ _ _ ___ Supporting Sentence 2:____H
e always sleep which means he real y lazy most of hamster like
this.They sleep in al day and w ake up i n the e
vening. They find food in night same as wild animals. Sometime they do c ute action that so funny.__ _ _ Detail 2:__A hamster days_ _
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📖 AVTC2_Unit 5_Descriptive paragraphs Supporting Sentence 3:__The
y cant live too long.The l ife of hamster is only 2-3 years.That so
sad, they easy to die but they easy to raise if they have good h
ealthy they can live longer.We
need feed them once every 3 days.They can clean their body.So we neednt take care of them too much__ _
Detail 3:_____How to raise hamster____
Concluding Sentence: __In conclusion i t hink my Pudding is the cutest animal in the world, I f eel
him can listen and understand what i s ay.I real y love him i w ish he c an stay with me longest he
can.He helps me not lonely so i t hink I’m so lucky when I r aised him.__
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