Unit 7 - Scratch my back and I’ll scratch yours.- english | Đại học Văn Lang
Unit 7 - Scratch my back and I’ll scratch yours.- english | Đại học Văn Lang giúp sinh viên tham khảo, ôn luyện và phục vụ nhu cầu học tập của mình cụ thể là có định hướng, ôn tập, nắm vững kiến thức môn học và làm bài tốt trong những bài kiểm tra, bài tiểu luận, bài tập kết thúc học phần, từ đó học tập tốt và có kết quả cao cũng như có thể vận dụng tốt những kiến thức mình đã học
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📖 AVTC2_Unit 7_Opinion Paragraphs_Structure and Brainstorming III. POST WRITING Task 11. Peer Editing
Work in pairs. Read your partner’s outline. Then use the Checklist below to offer
feedback that can help your partner improve his/her writing. Y/ Content Comments/ Suggestions N Sentences
Does the writer use correct punctuation? Yes
Are there any spel ing errors? No
Does the writer use correct verb tenses and Yes subject-verb agreement? Outline
Does the topic sentence clearly state your opinion? yes
Are the supporting points and details related to your topic sentence? yes
Are the ideas organized logical y? yes
Does the conclusion restate your opinion or summarize the main ideas? yes
Is there anything in the paragraph not clear to you? no
If so, write down your comment.
Task 12. Additional topic for further practice.
Brainstorm ideas and complete the outline for the following topic.
Do you think that video games can have negative impacts on children? Why or why not?
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Here are some suggested questions:
1. Do you think that video games can have negative impacts on children? Why (not)?
2. What are some negative impacts of video games? Can you give a fact, an example, or a reason to support this idea?
3. What are some positive effects of video games? Can you give a fact, an example, or a reason to support this idea? 12.1. Brainstorm area: 12.2. Outline:
Topic Sentence: _ Personal y, I think video games can have negative impacts on children__ Supporting Sentence 1: ____ _____
Detail 1: ________This is because video games attract al of people in this. It makes we can
no resist when play video games so we wil not have any time to do other work. For example,
we spend 5 hours to study but when we play video games we just have 1 hours to study.________ Supporting Sentence 2: _____ S
_ econdly, play videos games usual y we can meet many kinds
of people and we can affect by ba - d tempered person. ______
Detail 2: __This is because most of the children like play video games but they do not mature
enough to know what is good or bad person which means they can get bad thoughts into their
mind. For example, the children can feel scared by threats and temptations through the video games__
Supporting Sentence 3: _Thirdly, actual y, playing games is not bad if we play less and play healthy games_
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Detail 3: _This is because we can find any game infer, solve puzzles,... It make good at mind.
For example, we can increase the ability to concentrate when we play solve puzzles game._ Concluding Sentence: ___A
s a result, Video games can have negative impacts on children
because they do not mature enough to know what good or bad person i . s But if you want to play, you can play barely ___ _
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